Ancillary Task (Newspaper Advert) Audience Feedback

I posted my finished design on facebook and asked people to give me some feedback. I asked what they liked, what they didn't like,  as well as what they thought should be added, removed and changed if anything. I found all the responses very helpful and I will take into account every comment made as I make slight changes to the layout of the advert. I have posted a screenshot of the comments below:

A big thanks to everyone who commented!